Because Of You

September 9, 2016      Tom Belford

Here’s one of the best email subject lines to hit my in-box in a long time …

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What can I add, except to say that, once I opened the email, Charity:Water indeed delivered the right message, in this case a ‘thank you’ to its volunteers, as usual with a video.

Tom

2 responses to “Because Of You”

  1. Matthew Sherrington says:

    In response to the crisis in public trust and confidence in charities in the UK last year, the umbrella body National Council for Voluntary Organisations led an initiative to address that. One of the projects was a Narrative project, an effort to imagine the story about charities we’d want people to recognise once the storm had passed; a story that had them at the centre of it rather than a story about charities and negative media stories.

    It’s theme (strengthened after some focus group testing)? “Because of you.”

    You can read about the initiative in the slide deck in this blog, from slide 36. The Narrative text is on slide 44. (Not meant for public-facing messaging, but to get charities themselves to think about their tone).

    http://blogs.ncvo.org.uk/2016/07/21/whats-next-on-public-trust-and-confidence-in-charities/

  2. As far as I’m concerned, the three most powerful words in fundraising are “you,” “because” and “thanks.” This has it all!!! Thanks so much for sharing. For more, see http://www.clairification.com/2015/11/17/3-word-formula-guaranteed-to-raise-money/