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Don’t Talk About The Nail!

If there’s one piece of advice you’ve probably heard over and over from your fundraising copy advisers (and The Agitator … search ‘Copywriting’), it’s … DON’T talk about how great your nonprofit is. DO talk about how great your donor is … and how their gift will bring about the changes they want to see […]

Learn More March 12, 2014

Tighten Your Web

My suspicion is that many new, prospective donors are knocking at the door of your nonprofit website, but ‘escaping’ because your ‘web’ isn’t sticky enough to catch them. Perhaps they were driven there by some communication from you, or by some event that brought your ‘category’ or maybe even your specific organization to their attention. […]

Learn More February 27, 2014

Overcoming The Noise

When you think about the competition for those donor dollars your organization deserves, you probably think first about the other nonprofits active in your space. Curses are muttered. But that assumes a head-to-head competition — donor gets their message, gets your message, compares the two … and they win the contribution. In reality, your message […]

Learn More February 3, 2014

But You Are Free …

Want to double your persuasion power? The Neuromarketing blog has the answer. In their post, Four Words That Double Persuasion, they report: “Want to double your success in persuading people to do as you ask? Four simple words, and even other phrases with the same meaning, have been shown to double the success rate in […]

Learn More January 27, 2014

Whose Story Is It, Anyway?

Yes, you’ve heard it before, including from The Agitator … “Use stories.” “Tell your donor a story.” “Stories engage emotionally.” Etc, etc. But will any story do? Obviously the same story doesn’t work for every prospective donor, however carefully targeted and apparently similar they might be. Consider the view of marketing guru Seth Godin. He […]

Learn More December 2, 2013

What’s Your Thanksgiving Story?

Our US readers will spend the next few days in thanksgiving. Happy Thanksgiving to each of you! You’ll be encountering a healthy (?) serving of family and friends, many of whom will want to know the latest about your work and how it’s going. Sure, you could say, “Our online giving is up over its […]

Learn More November 27, 2013

Thank You MailChimp

As this study from email firm MailChimp indicates, a single word in the subject line can make a big difference in open rates. To reach its conclusions, in Choose Your Words Wisely MailChimp studied about 24 billion delivered emails, looking at subject lines composed in the aggregate of approximately 22,000 distinct words. Some findings … […]

Learn More November 26, 2013

Not Any Ring Will Do

Jeff Brooks at Future Fundraising Now strikes a nerve — or maybe the funny bone — with his recent post, Fundraising starts with donors, which in turn links to an article by David Meerman Scott, titled Making stuff up. C’mon, admit it! Anyone running a direct response fundraising program has committed the sin. I’m not […]

Learn More November 25, 2013

Why Start With ‘Why?’

In this TED talk, How Great Leaders Inspire Action, Simon Sinek points us to the power of ‘Why?’ In a nutshell, his argument is that most efforts to lead — to persuade or inspire or attract others to follow or invest in what we are urging — begin at the wrong end of the communications […]

Learn More November 21, 2013

Is Giving Considered Or Impulse?

Very few people get up in the morning, look in the mirror, and say to themselves: “Today I’ll make a donation to … [fill in the blank — cure cancer, sponsor a child in Bolivia, save the planet from global warming, support my local ballet company.]” Instead, their attention is pinged by a relevant event, […]

Learn More November 14, 2013

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q: As a designer who works with non-profits on fundraising strategy, I see the language like the following: “Our supporters help empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs.” I do not think the word “help” is useful–I think “Our supporters empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs. ” is much more engaging. Thoughts?

    Whether “help” is more engaging or not really depends on the framing and context. The word help can sometimes weaken the perceived agency of the supporter, making their role feel secondary rather than central (your point). On the other hand, help can also signal collaboration rather than implying full ownership of the outcome, which might […]

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    Q: We started offering a donor cover option last april 1. The data to date suggests this may be dampening giving.eg. those who say yes to donor cover have a lower average gift (based on analysis of 6000+ gifts). I’m wondering if those who give lower gifts feel more guilt and therefore say yes to donor cover or if the presence of donor cover is making people adjust (lower) their gift size to accommodate the extra 3%. Would love any insights you have.

    Great question! Here’s how behavioral science can help unpack what might be happening: Pain of Paying: Even a small extra charge can make giving feel more transactional than emotional, potentially reducing generosity. Fairness Concerns: Some donors might perceive donor cover as a surcharge rather than a contribution to the cause. If they feel the charity […]

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    Q: When writing an appeal, I waffle back and forth between writing “Your gift CAN…” or “Your gift WILL…” Any studies of which of these two words is best for an appeal?

    The choice between “Your gift CAN…” and “Your gift WILL…” taps into the psychological framing of certainty vs. possibility. Currently, there is no academic research directly comparing these two framings in charitable appeals. However, I suspect no framing is universally better—the outcome likely depends on your target audience and the campaign’s goal. Here are some thoughts: Certainty Framing – […]

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    Q: Do you have any insight on whether integrating an individual giving appeal with other comms from the charity in both appearance and messaging can uplift results? Or does the actual appeal become ‘lost’ for lack of stand-out?

    Integrating an individual giving appeal with other communications from a charity can have both positive and negative effects, and the outcome largely depends on how it’s executed. Advantages of Integration Brand Consistency: Maintaining a consistent appearance and messaging across all communications can reinforce the org’s brand identity and strengthen brand recognition and trust among your […]

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    Q: Is there any research on response rate impact in direct mail when referring to a sustainer gift as ongoing or recurring (catching all frequencies) v. monthly or annual?

    I’m not aware of any in-market tests specifically comparing recurring vs. gift frequency language. I suspect the answer might not be the same with all gift frequencies, nor with all people. It sounds like a great opportunity for you to test and find out what works for your audience. Based on the literature, here’s a couple […]

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    Q: A major conservation nonprofit sends me lots of mail, many of which have on the envelope “time to renew” or “2nd notice.” I find this practice deceptive, especially as I haven’t given to said organization since 1997. It must be effective or they wouldn’t do it. But is it ethical?

    Based on what we know from existing data, those renewal notices can actually be pretty effective in getting people to donate. They tap into our psychology – creating a sense of urgency, reminding us of past support, and using personalization to make the message hit home. They’re playing on our natural tendencies to feel obligated […]

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