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How Does Your Packaging Compare?

One of the key lessons in the Walter Isaacson’s book, Steve Jobs, is the passionate attention and priority Jobs gave to design, even to the point where design considerations often over-ruled engineering constraints (frequently obliterating them). As recounted by Isaacson (p. 78), Jobs’ first mentor and investor, Mike Markkula, boiled the Apple marketing philosophy down […]

Learn More May 30, 2012

Test To Impress

There’s heaps of advice floating around, especially in the commercial space, for how to improve response to email marketing messages. But it always comes back to … you’ve got to test for your own organization and circumstances. With so much in email marketing that could be tested, where do you begin? Here’s a useful approach […]

Learn More May 14, 2012

OK, “Thank You!”

I’d like to say “Thank you” to all the readers who commented on my controversial No “Thank You” post of last week. I do so noting there’s no empirical evidence that thanking you will make you more likely to comment again! For suggesting that maybe “Thank you’s” to donors don’t matter, some of you concluded […]

Learn More April 24, 2012

8 ‘Duh’ Principles Of Direct Marketing

We fundraisers all have our ‘Duh!’ moments, often when we realize we’ve violated some cardinal rule of practice. Many Agitator readers responded ‘DUH!’ to my post yesterday, asking whether anyone knew, based on empirical evidence, whether thanking donors actually increased their subsequent giving. Don’t worry … I’ll return to that subject next week! But here’s […]

Learn More April 20, 2012

Amish Chicken And Tom’s Demise

Tom’s not getting any younger so I find myself checking the obituaries more frequently these days wondering if the next Agitator post is covered. So far so good. I talked to him this morning. Alive. But recently, in search of Tom’s unplanned demise (Here at the Agitator we have a liberal HR policy requiring two […]

Learn More April 2, 2012

He Had Leathery Hands

Or should it be: “He had strong hands”? Here’s one for the copywriters and wordsmiths in our audience. In a NY Times article, Your Brain on Fiction, Annie Murphy Paul (author of Origins: How the Nine Months Before Birth Shape the Rest of Our Lives) writes about neuroscience research on how word  imagery affects our […]

Learn More March 20, 2012

The Perfect Thank You

If I might please interrupt your reading of “What to learn from the Kony video” articles for a few moments … For a fundraising lesson. Here, from Charity:Water, is a terrific example of the way ‘Thank You” needs to be expressed to your donors. Click the screen shot (or here) to view the video and […]

Learn More March 19, 2012

YouTube Guide For Nonprofits

You know how much I love to see fundraisers using video! Here’s a 24-page guide from YouTube — YouTube-for-Good — advising on how to tell better stories and get them noticed (i.e, more visible to search engines). They’re also sponsoring a one-day video boot camp for nonprofits in San Francisco on April 2. You must […]

Learn More February 24, 2012

Don’t Waste Their Time

One of the worst things you can do to a donor is waste their time. I was reminded of that reading this article about marketing to the affluent. But it’s not just the affluent who are time deficient. It’s everybody! How do you waste a donor’s time? By sending them something that’s not: #1 Relevant […]

Learn More February 23, 2012

How Often To Ask?

This is one of the perennial questions of fundraising, particularly direct response fundraising. Anyone who has THE answer is welcome to guest author an Agitator post on the subject. But here is as close to a definitive answer as I think there is … courtesy of fundraiser Ken Burnett. His key point … “It’s not […]

Learn More February 13, 2012

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q:We are struggling with acquistion. During our biggest community campaign, a colleague is suggesting that we have a QR code directing donors to a donate page that does not capture donor information – just a donation and an email address. We won’t be able to post any of these new doors our lvoely newsletters, or thank you letters. We’ll likely never hear from them again. What’s the best method to get this team to see the importance about a donor vs a donation?

    Thanks so much for raising this. Yes, capturing donor information can be helpful for stewardship like newsletters, thank-you letters, impact updates. But how you ask matters. Forcing full data capture introduces friction that can significantly depress conversion, many donors may simply abandon the process. Beyond the friction itself, required fields also shift the emotional experience […]

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    Q: Should we include “Giving Tuesday” in the subject lines for the emails that are going out before Giving Tuesday?

    Unlike holidays that everyone already knows, Giving Tuesday is a created event. Many donors recognize the name but not the exact timing, so referencing it becomes a helpful cue. It serves as a reminder and taps into social norm activation (“everyone’s giving today”), which boosts response. However, we still want it paired with the mission, […]

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    Q: can we pull the match language into the subject lines? Or this should be an A/B test?

    When a subject line leads with the match (“Your gift matched!”), it risks triggering market-norm thinking: the sense that giving is a financial transaction rather than an act rooted in values, identity, and care. This shift reduces intrinsic motivation and, over time, can weaken donor satisfaction and long-term engagement. It also makes the email indistinguishable […]

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    Q: Our mid-level donor team removed the QR code from the DM donation form that links to the donation page, but have left the URL for them to type it in manually. Not sure why they are adding a barrier to the donation process for a higher value donor – but I have to ask – is there any proof – either way – if a QR donation code reduces MV online giving, has any effect on their donation amount, has any effect on off line donations? Thank you….

    There’s no evidence that QR codes suppress mid-value giving; all available research suggests they either help or have no negative effect. In fact, behavioral and usability research consistently shows the opposite: reducing friction at any point in the donation process increases completion rates and total response. And that has nothing to do with capacity and […]

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    Q: How can we effectively use behavioral science to help shift our Board’s mindset. The majority are extremely resistant to asking their networks or sharing their contact lists with us, even after a candid discussion with an external lay leader who has been training boards with her fantastic Fundraising isn’t the F Word! workshop. We have also offered to use our automated email tool to send their appeals from their own email. It is so frustrating. We even have 2 Board members and the chair trying put some accountability on them for our big event but people are not really moving!

    What you’re experiencing is very common. Resistance often isn’t about capability, but about motivation quality. If board members feel pushed into fundraising, that triggers controlled motivation (low quality motivation) i.e. obligation, guilt, or fear of judgment, which often results in avoidance. Instead, we need to create conditions for volitional motivation (high quality motivation) by satisfying […]

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    Q: Copywriters often argue the ask should appear on the first page, but that usually breaks the story in two. With a one-sided letter the ask is always on page one, but with a two-sided letter it may fall on the second page—do results differ? Has your appeal structure been tested on both one-sided and two-sided letters? I just read the article Your Appeal Outline: Thoughtful Strategy or Random Spasm?

    That’s a really thoughtful question, and you’re not the first to raise it. Many of our clients have been cautious about placing the ask at the very end. To address their concern, we’ve tested both approaches, and the results are clear: when the ask comes last, even if that means it appears on the second […]

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