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AGITATOR WEEKEND: Terrible Week…Survival Tips

The Agitator’s Week In Review.  This week the roller coaster that is the U.S. and global stock markets rocketed down, then up,  on the news that The Fed, the U.S. Treasury and central banks worldwide pumped billions into financial markets ending a punishing week of financial panic…a malfunction in a 30-ton transformer temporarily halted huge […]

Learn More September 20, 2008

The Best E-Appeal I’ve Seen This Year

On Friday, Agitator reader Charlie Orasin, Senior VP for Marketing and Constituency Development at Defenders of Wildlife Action Fund sent us what has to be the best e-appeal I’ve seen this year. Designed to raise money to put a shocking video of what Defenders calls “Sarah Palin’s Wolf-killing Record” on TV, this exemplary appeal is […]

Learn More September 16, 2008

Alicia Keyes Video – Slick Or Stirring?

I’d really like your feedback on this one. As you know, I’m a big fan of using online video to help deliver calls to action, including fundraising appeals. Most of what I’ve seen has a homespun or cinema verite’ look to it. But here’s something quite different … a very high quality film, apparently now […]

Learn More September 15, 2008

Is A Long Email Too Long?

A quiz for you e-marketers out there … What generates the most click-throughs in an online pitch … like your e-newsletter or email fundraising appeal? A bold banner at the top A sidebar hotbox with take-action button Links in the body copy According to copywriter Karen Gedney, writing for the Clickz Network, the most response […]

Learn More August 26, 2008

Global Issue Advertising Campaigns

James Morgan of The Nonproft Quarterly recently pointed me to Osocio, a blog and website that features issue and social advertising campaigns from around the world. A great window to how advocates around the world are advancing their agendas. Tom

Learn More August 25, 2008

Billie Outswims Stephanie Colburtle

I might be late to the party, but I’m still blown away by the "Great Turtle Race," a multi-faceted campaign designed to draw attention to the plight of endangered leatherback turtles. Sponsored by Conservation International and a coalition of partner groups. Sponsoring companies paid for satellite tags that allowed six migrating leatherback turtles to be […]

Learn More August 5, 2008

Still Pondering Online Video?

Here’s some data re online video used by BrightRoll, the internet’s biggest online advertising network. 1. Video is Bigger Than Search: 12 billion videos are watched per month vs. 10.5 billion searches conducted. 2. Video Consumption is Quickly Moving Online: 19% of total video consumption is now online, versus 11% a year ago. 3. Most […]

Learn More August 1, 2008

Testing Email Subject Lines

Here are email subject line testing tips from five experts. You might think they’re kinda no-brainers. But if they help prod you to examine far more systematically your approach to subject lines in your email campaigns, then high-fives all around! This is like testing your carrier in direct mail. Rather important! Tom

Learn More July 29, 2008

Successful Viral Videos

It’s not easy to trigger a successful viral marketing campaign. But here, from blogger B.L Ochman, is a good overview of do’s and dont’s. With lots of resource links as well as examples of successful — and failed — online video campaigns. In a nutshell, what do you need for a successful viral campaign? Says […]

Learn More July 28, 2008

Mailing To Generation Y

Recently we reported our recent DonorTrends survey finding that "Newbies" — donors born after Boomers (1946-1964), had jumped forward in giving, in fact passing Boomers in average annual giving. Our survey data indicates that 55% of Newbies have contributed online to charities, falling to 29% who have given online to advocacy groups and 16% to […]

Learn More July 25, 2008

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q: As a designer who works with non-profits on fundraising strategy, I see the language like the following: “Our supporters help empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs.” I do not think the word “help” is useful–I think “Our supporters empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs. ” is much more engaging. Thoughts?

    Whether “help” is more engaging or not really depends on the framing and context. The word help can sometimes weaken the perceived agency of the supporter, making their role feel secondary rather than central (your point). On the other hand, help can also signal collaboration rather than implying full ownership of the outcome, which might […]

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    Q: We started offering a donor cover option last april 1. The data to date suggests this may be dampening giving.eg. those who say yes to donor cover have a lower average gift (based on analysis of 6000+ gifts). I’m wondering if those who give lower gifts feel more guilt and therefore say yes to donor cover or if the presence of donor cover is making people adjust (lower) their gift size to accommodate the extra 3%. Would love any insights you have.

    Great question! Here’s how behavioral science can help unpack what might be happening: Pain of Paying: Even a small extra charge can make giving feel more transactional than emotional, potentially reducing generosity. Fairness Concerns: Some donors might perceive donor cover as a surcharge rather than a contribution to the cause. If they feel the charity […]

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    Q: When writing an appeal, I waffle back and forth between writing “Your gift CAN…” or “Your gift WILL…” Any studies of which of these two words is best for an appeal?

    The choice between “Your gift CAN…” and “Your gift WILL…” taps into the psychological framing of certainty vs. possibility. Currently, there is no academic research directly comparing these two framings in charitable appeals. However, I suspect no framing is universally better—the outcome likely depends on your target audience and the campaign’s goal. Here are some thoughts: Certainty Framing – […]

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    Q: Do you have any insight on whether integrating an individual giving appeal with other comms from the charity in both appearance and messaging can uplift results? Or does the actual appeal become ‘lost’ for lack of stand-out?

    Integrating an individual giving appeal with other communications from a charity can have both positive and negative effects, and the outcome largely depends on how it’s executed. Advantages of Integration Brand Consistency: Maintaining a consistent appearance and messaging across all communications can reinforce the org’s brand identity and strengthen brand recognition and trust among your […]

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    Q: Is there any research on response rate impact in direct mail when referring to a sustainer gift as ongoing or recurring (catching all frequencies) v. monthly or annual?

    I’m not aware of any in-market tests specifically comparing recurring vs. gift frequency language. I suspect the answer might not be the same with all gift frequencies, nor with all people. It sounds like a great opportunity for you to test and find out what works for your audience. Based on the literature, here’s a couple […]

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    Q: A major conservation nonprofit sends me lots of mail, many of which have on the envelope “time to renew” or “2nd notice.” I find this practice deceptive, especially as I haven’t given to said organization since 1997. It must be effective or they wouldn’t do it. But is it ethical?

    Based on what we know from existing data, those renewal notices can actually be pretty effective in getting people to donate. They tap into our psychology – creating a sense of urgency, reminding us of past support, and using personalization to make the message hit home. They’re playing on our natural tendencies to feel obligated […]

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