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Copywriting / creative

Where Do You Begin?

This post from Seth Godin — Where do we begin? — got me thinking about copywriting. I’m using "copywriting" expansively here — a direct mail letter, email appeal, web copy, press release, note to major donor, cover letter for your resume. What do you assume about your reader? What does he or she know about you, […]

Learn More April 2, 2008

Motivating Your Volunteers

Does your nonprofit rely upon volunteers? If so, how do you celebrate them? Below is an example of the online video approach of the American Red Cross. Most nonprofits don’t have the resources to produce slick videos with celebrity volunteers. But a simple video, shot with a hand-held video camera, of your CEO having a "heart to […]

Learn More March 19, 2008

Bringing Your Donors “Inside”

Direct marketing guru Denny Hatch offers his analysis of the Obama online fundraising phenom. As usual, an entertaining and insightful read. And you get his critique of Clinton’s "ringing phone" TV ad as a bonus. His key point … the cacophany of email messages he has received from the Obama campaign indeed work because they […]

Learn More March 13, 2008

Words That Work

If you’re in the communications side of the biz, or spend time writing copy, here are two books you should peruse … from opposite sides of the ideological spectrum. The advice from both is superb … but for such prominent communications experts, the books are, well, wordy! From the progressive side, George Lakoff, Don’t Think […]

Learn More March 5, 2008

Count The Ellipses

Lately I’ve noticed that in my blogging and other online copywriting I’ve fallen into the habit of using more and more ellipses. I hadn’t really thought about it. It just somehow felt right … something about the pacing. So this article from Marketing Sherpa, The Glory of the Ellipsis, jumped out at me. Their observation: "The […]

Learn More March 4, 2008

Beware of SOFFI

I have a message for the readers of The Agitator: Don’t waste your time by going to the SOFII Website.  Stay away from it.  Don’t say any good things about it. And please let me quickly tell you why I’m sharing this negative reaction about SOFII. It’s because, a few days ago, I received a […]

Learn More February 27, 2008

“The Mediocre borrow. Genius steals.”

George Bernard Shaw sure had it right when it comes to our trade. So much great, tried and true creative and campaign stuff out there, but so, so difficult to lay your hands on it. Until now! Enter SOFII, a new and wondrous web-based attic of fundraising creative and ‘how to’ wisdom that bills itself […]

Learn More February 22, 2008

The Spam Museum

Sometimes you just have to ask yourself … “How could I possibly gotten so far in life without knowing about this?!” That's what hit me when I visited the SPAM Museum, at the suggestion of Agitator reader Charles Langley, of the Utility Consumers' Action Network in San Diego. Age-old questions are answered on this site, […]

Learn More February 12, 2008

Hope & Love … Yeah, Right!

Seth Godin says that people take action based on one of three emotions … fear, hope, or love. Not to play semantics, but I think this is a somewhat limited palette of emotions. For many in the direct response biz, the key emotional drivers consist of the “Super Seven” … FearFlatteryGreed/AdvantageGuiltAngerExclusivitySalvation/Hope This is a pretty […]

Learn More February 8, 2008

If You Can Sell A Toilet Seat …

I've been “sitting” on this item awhile, but finally I just can't resist sharing it. From blogger David Scott via MarketingProfs, it falls in the “if you don't think creative matters, think again” category. It's a one-minute TV commercial. Over 1 million YouTube views. I can't say more. Yep, get your lists right. And make […]

Learn More February 5, 2008

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q:We are struggling with acquistion. During our biggest community campaign, a colleague is suggesting that we have a QR code directing donors to a donate page that does not capture donor information – just a donation and an email address. We won’t be able to post any of these new doors our lvoely newsletters, or thank you letters. We’ll likely never hear from them again. What’s the best method to get this team to see the importance about a donor vs a donation?

    Thanks so much for raising this. Yes, capturing donor information can be helpful for stewardship like newsletters, thank-you letters, impact updates. But how you ask matters. Forcing full data capture introduces friction that can significantly depress conversion, many donors may simply abandon the process. Beyond the friction itself, required fields also shift the emotional experience […]

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    Q: Should we include “Giving Tuesday” in the subject lines for the emails that are going out before Giving Tuesday?

    Unlike holidays that everyone already knows, Giving Tuesday is a created event. Many donors recognize the name but not the exact timing, so referencing it becomes a helpful cue. It serves as a reminder and taps into social norm activation (“everyone’s giving today”), which boosts response. However, we still want it paired with the mission, […]

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    Q: can we pull the match language into the subject lines? Or this should be an A/B test?

    When a subject line leads with the match (“Your gift matched!”), it risks triggering market-norm thinking: the sense that giving is a financial transaction rather than an act rooted in values, identity, and care. This shift reduces intrinsic motivation and, over time, can weaken donor satisfaction and long-term engagement. It also makes the email indistinguishable […]

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    Q: Our mid-level donor team removed the QR code from the DM donation form that links to the donation page, but have left the URL for them to type it in manually. Not sure why they are adding a barrier to the donation process for a higher value donor – but I have to ask – is there any proof – either way – if a QR donation code reduces MV online giving, has any effect on their donation amount, has any effect on off line donations? Thank you….

    There’s no evidence that QR codes suppress mid-value giving; all available research suggests they either help or have no negative effect. In fact, behavioral and usability research consistently shows the opposite: reducing friction at any point in the donation process increases completion rates and total response. And that has nothing to do with capacity and […]

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    Q: How can we effectively use behavioral science to help shift our Board’s mindset. The majority are extremely resistant to asking their networks or sharing their contact lists with us, even after a candid discussion with an external lay leader who has been training boards with her fantastic Fundraising isn’t the F Word! workshop. We have also offered to use our automated email tool to send their appeals from their own email. It is so frustrating. We even have 2 Board members and the chair trying put some accountability on them for our big event but people are not really moving!

    What you’re experiencing is very common. Resistance often isn’t about capability, but about motivation quality. If board members feel pushed into fundraising, that triggers controlled motivation (low quality motivation) i.e. obligation, guilt, or fear of judgment, which often results in avoidance. Instead, we need to create conditions for volitional motivation (high quality motivation) by satisfying […]

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    Q: Copywriters often argue the ask should appear on the first page, but that usually breaks the story in two. With a one-sided letter the ask is always on page one, but with a two-sided letter it may fall on the second page—do results differ? Has your appeal structure been tested on both one-sided and two-sided letters? I just read the article Your Appeal Outline: Thoughtful Strategy or Random Spasm?

    That’s a really thoughtful question, and you’re not the first to raise it. Many of our clients have been cautious about placing the ask at the very end. To address their concern, we’ve tested both approaches, and the results are clear: when the ask comes last, even if that means it appears on the second […]

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