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Copywriting / creative

Where Do You Begin?

This post from Seth Godin — Where do we begin? — got me thinking about copywriting. I’m using "copywriting" expansively here — a direct mail letter, email appeal, web copy, press release, note to major donor, cover letter for your resume. What do you assume about your reader? What does he or she know about you, […]

Learn More April 2, 2008

Motivating Your Volunteers

Does your nonprofit rely upon volunteers? If so, how do you celebrate them? Below is an example of the online video approach of the American Red Cross. Most nonprofits don’t have the resources to produce slick videos with celebrity volunteers. But a simple video, shot with a hand-held video camera, of your CEO having a "heart to […]

Learn More March 19, 2008

Bringing Your Donors “Inside”

Direct marketing guru Denny Hatch offers his analysis of the Obama online fundraising phenom. As usual, an entertaining and insightful read. And you get his critique of Clinton’s "ringing phone" TV ad as a bonus. His key point … the cacophany of email messages he has received from the Obama campaign indeed work because they […]

Learn More March 13, 2008

Words That Work

If you’re in the communications side of the biz, or spend time writing copy, here are two books you should peruse … from opposite sides of the ideological spectrum. The advice from both is superb … but for such prominent communications experts, the books are, well, wordy! From the progressive side, George Lakoff, Don’t Think […]

Learn More March 5, 2008

Count The Ellipses

Lately I’ve noticed that in my blogging and other online copywriting I’ve fallen into the habit of using more and more ellipses. I hadn’t really thought about it. It just somehow felt right … something about the pacing. So this article from Marketing Sherpa, The Glory of the Ellipsis, jumped out at me. Their observation: "The […]

Learn More March 4, 2008

Beware of SOFFI

I have a message for the readers of The Agitator: Don’t waste your time by going to the SOFII Website.  Stay away from it.  Don’t say any good things about it. And please let me quickly tell you why I’m sharing this negative reaction about SOFII. It’s because, a few days ago, I received a […]

Learn More February 27, 2008

“The Mediocre borrow. Genius steals.”

George Bernard Shaw sure had it right when it comes to our trade. So much great, tried and true creative and campaign stuff out there, but so, so difficult to lay your hands on it. Until now! Enter SOFII, a new and wondrous web-based attic of fundraising creative and ‘how to’ wisdom that bills itself […]

Learn More February 22, 2008

The Spam Museum

Sometimes you just have to ask yourself … “How could I possibly gotten so far in life without knowing about this?!” That's what hit me when I visited the SPAM Museum, at the suggestion of Agitator reader Charles Langley, of the Utility Consumers' Action Network in San Diego. Age-old questions are answered on this site, […]

Learn More February 12, 2008

Hope & Love … Yeah, Right!

Seth Godin says that people take action based on one of three emotions … fear, hope, or love. Not to play semantics, but I think this is a somewhat limited palette of emotions. For many in the direct response biz, the key emotional drivers consist of the “Super Seven” … FearFlatteryGreed/AdvantageGuiltAngerExclusivitySalvation/Hope This is a pretty […]

Learn More February 8, 2008

If You Can Sell A Toilet Seat …

I've been “sitting” on this item awhile, but finally I just can't resist sharing it. From blogger David Scott via MarketingProfs, it falls in the “if you don't think creative matters, think again” category. It's a one-minute TV commercial. Over 1 million YouTube views. I can't say more. Yep, get your lists right. And make […]

Learn More February 5, 2008

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q: As a designer who works with non-profits on fundraising strategy, I see the language like the following: “Our supporters help empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs.” I do not think the word “help” is useful–I think “Our supporters empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs. ” is much more engaging. Thoughts?

    Whether “help” is more engaging or not really depends on the framing and context. The word help can sometimes weaken the perceived agency of the supporter, making their role feel secondary rather than central (your point). On the other hand, help can also signal collaboration rather than implying full ownership of the outcome, which might […]

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    Q: We started offering a donor cover option last april 1. The data to date suggests this may be dampening giving.eg. those who say yes to donor cover have a lower average gift (based on analysis of 6000+ gifts). I’m wondering if those who give lower gifts feel more guilt and therefore say yes to donor cover or if the presence of donor cover is making people adjust (lower) their gift size to accommodate the extra 3%. Would love any insights you have.

    Great question! Here’s how behavioral science can help unpack what might be happening: Pain of Paying: Even a small extra charge can make giving feel more transactional than emotional, potentially reducing generosity. Fairness Concerns: Some donors might perceive donor cover as a surcharge rather than a contribution to the cause. If they feel the charity […]

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    Q: When writing an appeal, I waffle back and forth between writing “Your gift CAN…” or “Your gift WILL…” Any studies of which of these two words is best for an appeal?

    The choice between “Your gift CAN…” and “Your gift WILL…” taps into the psychological framing of certainty vs. possibility. Currently, there is no academic research directly comparing these two framings in charitable appeals. However, I suspect no framing is universally better—the outcome likely depends on your target audience and the campaign’s goal. Here are some thoughts: Certainty Framing – […]

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    Q: Do you have any insight on whether integrating an individual giving appeal with other comms from the charity in both appearance and messaging can uplift results? Or does the actual appeal become ‘lost’ for lack of stand-out?

    Integrating an individual giving appeal with other communications from a charity can have both positive and negative effects, and the outcome largely depends on how it’s executed. Advantages of Integration Brand Consistency: Maintaining a consistent appearance and messaging across all communications can reinforce the org’s brand identity and strengthen brand recognition and trust among your […]

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    Q: Is there any research on response rate impact in direct mail when referring to a sustainer gift as ongoing or recurring (catching all frequencies) v. monthly or annual?

    I’m not aware of any in-market tests specifically comparing recurring vs. gift frequency language. I suspect the answer might not be the same with all gift frequencies, nor with all people. It sounds like a great opportunity for you to test and find out what works for your audience. Based on the literature, here’s a couple […]

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    Q: A major conservation nonprofit sends me lots of mail, many of which have on the envelope “time to renew” or “2nd notice.” I find this practice deceptive, especially as I haven’t given to said organization since 1997. It must be effective or they wouldn’t do it. But is it ethical?

    Based on what we know from existing data, those renewal notices can actually be pretty effective in getting people to donate. They tap into our psychology – creating a sense of urgency, reminding us of past support, and using personalization to make the message hit home. They’re playing on our natural tendencies to feel obligated […]

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