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I Know The Winner

The winner of the 2008 U.S. Presidential election is known to me. For the sum of one American dollar in cash, I will reveal the name to you. If the person I name does not win, your dollar will be returned within 72 hours and you will never hear from me again. Tom Belford Read […]

Learn More October 2, 2007

Low Budget Online Video

The other day we urged our readers to dive into online video, and pointed out that big budgets weren't required. We've received some useful comments on that post from Humane Society of the U.S. and from See3 Communications, which I urge you to read. But here in its entirety is a mini-case study sent by […]

Learn More September 27, 2007

Damn Yankees!

With apologies in advance for our more proper readers … Some fundraising ideas are just soooo good all we can do is stand back and applaud. Here's one from The Nonprofiteer, one of our favorite “in-your-face” bloggers … “Or how about … making thousands of dollars by standing outside ballparks selling t-shirts that say: “Yuck […]

Learn More August 30, 2007

Lessons In Copywriting

Beginning with a critique of email spam from the standpoint of effective copywriting, direct mail wiz Denny Hatch winds up reminding us of the most fundamental principles of the copywriting craft. For example: The letter is all about “You” copy — it's a highly emotional, personal message from the writer to the reader that translates […]

Learn More August 22, 2007

Ideacide

Guy Kawasaki, original marketer of the Mac, is my favorite collector of thinking about innovation and innovators. In this post, he's relayed the “seven sins of solutions” as articulated by Matt May, author of The Elegant Solution. May seems to have coined the marvelous term “ideacide” to describe the process of killing innovative thinking. Here, […]

Learn More August 10, 2007

Copywriting Checklist

Last week we talked about checklists, and asked for yours. Here's a checklist for writing copy — copy that seeks response — from Agitator reader Ellis Robinson, author of The Nonprofit Membership Toolkit. Some boxes to check: Use the word “you” in the first sentence or paragraph. Make sure there is a reason to respond […]

Learn More August 7, 2007

Science Idol Winner

The 2007 winner of Union of Concerned Scientists' Science Idol Contest is Jesse Springer, a graphic designer from Eugene, Oregon. The Science Idol contest elicits editorial cartoons designed to shed light on governmental interference with science. Some of us still believe that sound science should lead to sound public policy. Hundreds of entries were submitted […]

Learn More August 1, 2007

Is Your Homepage Dead?

Should you think of your nonprofit's homepage as the door to an apartment building, a book, a restaurant, or a first date? Or is it increasingly irrelevant, given today's patterns of internet usage? The issue: fewer and fewer visitors enter a website via its homepage (less than 50% and trending down according to some experts). […]

Learn More July 25, 2007

Sore-Eye-A-What?!

That's psoriasis … called the “Rodney Dangerfield” disease by Psoriasis Cure Now because it's a disease that gets no respect. To build awareness and support for increased research into this affliction, Psoriasis Cure Now is sponsoring a video contest. Amateur videographers are invited to submit 30 to 60 second videos about psoriasis. The video can […]

Learn More July 12, 2007

How Does Innovation Occur?

It's Monday Mind Stretch time again. Here's an interview, courtesy of Guy Kawasaki of Mac marketing fame, with Scott Berkun, author of The Myths of Innovation. Interesting points: “Epiphanies” or “magic moments” are really the culmination of dozens of smaller observations, inquiries, mistakes and comedies that occurred to make the “Eureka” possible. Finding support for […]

Learn More July 2, 2007

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q: As a designer who works with non-profits on fundraising strategy, I see the language like the following: “Our supporters help empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs.” I do not think the word “help” is useful–I think “Our supporters empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs. ” is much more engaging. Thoughts?

    Whether “help” is more engaging or not really depends on the framing and context. The word help can sometimes weaken the perceived agency of the supporter, making their role feel secondary rather than central (your point). On the other hand, help can also signal collaboration rather than implying full ownership of the outcome, which might […]

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    Q: We started offering a donor cover option last april 1. The data to date suggests this may be dampening giving.eg. those who say yes to donor cover have a lower average gift (based on analysis of 6000+ gifts). I’m wondering if those who give lower gifts feel more guilt and therefore say yes to donor cover or if the presence of donor cover is making people adjust (lower) their gift size to accommodate the extra 3%. Would love any insights you have.

    Great question! Here’s how behavioral science can help unpack what might be happening: Pain of Paying: Even a small extra charge can make giving feel more transactional than emotional, potentially reducing generosity. Fairness Concerns: Some donors might perceive donor cover as a surcharge rather than a contribution to the cause. If they feel the charity […]

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    Q: When writing an appeal, I waffle back and forth between writing “Your gift CAN…” or “Your gift WILL…” Any studies of which of these two words is best for an appeal?

    The choice between “Your gift CAN…” and “Your gift WILL…” taps into the psychological framing of certainty vs. possibility. Currently, there is no academic research directly comparing these two framings in charitable appeals. However, I suspect no framing is universally better—the outcome likely depends on your target audience and the campaign’s goal. Here are some thoughts: Certainty Framing – […]

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    Q: Do you have any insight on whether integrating an individual giving appeal with other comms from the charity in both appearance and messaging can uplift results? Or does the actual appeal become ‘lost’ for lack of stand-out?

    Integrating an individual giving appeal with other communications from a charity can have both positive and negative effects, and the outcome largely depends on how it’s executed. Advantages of Integration Brand Consistency: Maintaining a consistent appearance and messaging across all communications can reinforce the org’s brand identity and strengthen brand recognition and trust among your […]

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    Q: Is there any research on response rate impact in direct mail when referring to a sustainer gift as ongoing or recurring (catching all frequencies) v. monthly or annual?

    I’m not aware of any in-market tests specifically comparing recurring vs. gift frequency language. I suspect the answer might not be the same with all gift frequencies, nor with all people. It sounds like a great opportunity for you to test and find out what works for your audience. Based on the literature, here’s a couple […]

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    Q: A major conservation nonprofit sends me lots of mail, many of which have on the envelope “time to renew” or “2nd notice.” I find this practice deceptive, especially as I haven’t given to said organization since 1997. It must be effective or they wouldn’t do it. But is it ethical?

    Based on what we know from existing data, those renewal notices can actually be pretty effective in getting people to donate. They tap into our psychology – creating a sense of urgency, reminding us of past support, and using personalization to make the message hit home. They’re playing on our natural tendencies to feel obligated […]

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