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I Know The Winner

The winner of the 2008 U.S. Presidential election is known to me. For the sum of one American dollar in cash, I will reveal the name to you. If the person I name does not win, your dollar will be returned within 72 hours and you will never hear from me again. Tom Belford Read […]

Learn More October 2, 2007

Low Budget Online Video

The other day we urged our readers to dive into online video, and pointed out that big budgets weren't required. We've received some useful comments on that post from Humane Society of the U.S. and from See3 Communications, which I urge you to read. But here in its entirety is a mini-case study sent by […]

Learn More September 27, 2007

Damn Yankees!

With apologies in advance for our more proper readers … Some fundraising ideas are just soooo good all we can do is stand back and applaud. Here's one from The Nonprofiteer, one of our favorite “in-your-face” bloggers … “Or how about … making thousands of dollars by standing outside ballparks selling t-shirts that say: “Yuck […]

Learn More August 30, 2007

Lessons In Copywriting

Beginning with a critique of email spam from the standpoint of effective copywriting, direct mail wiz Denny Hatch winds up reminding us of the most fundamental principles of the copywriting craft. For example: The letter is all about “You” copy — it's a highly emotional, personal message from the writer to the reader that translates […]

Learn More August 22, 2007

Ideacide

Guy Kawasaki, original marketer of the Mac, is my favorite collector of thinking about innovation and innovators. In this post, he's relayed the “seven sins of solutions” as articulated by Matt May, author of The Elegant Solution. May seems to have coined the marvelous term “ideacide” to describe the process of killing innovative thinking. Here, […]

Learn More August 10, 2007

Copywriting Checklist

Last week we talked about checklists, and asked for yours. Here's a checklist for writing copy — copy that seeks response — from Agitator reader Ellis Robinson, author of The Nonprofit Membership Toolkit. Some boxes to check: Use the word “you” in the first sentence or paragraph. Make sure there is a reason to respond […]

Learn More August 7, 2007

Science Idol Winner

The 2007 winner of Union of Concerned Scientists' Science Idol Contest is Jesse Springer, a graphic designer from Eugene, Oregon. The Science Idol contest elicits editorial cartoons designed to shed light on governmental interference with science. Some of us still believe that sound science should lead to sound public policy. Hundreds of entries were submitted […]

Learn More August 1, 2007

Is Your Homepage Dead?

Should you think of your nonprofit's homepage as the door to an apartment building, a book, a restaurant, or a first date? Or is it increasingly irrelevant, given today's patterns of internet usage? The issue: fewer and fewer visitors enter a website via its homepage (less than 50% and trending down according to some experts). […]

Learn More July 25, 2007

Sore-Eye-A-What?!

That's psoriasis … called the “Rodney Dangerfield” disease by Psoriasis Cure Now because it's a disease that gets no respect. To build awareness and support for increased research into this affliction, Psoriasis Cure Now is sponsoring a video contest. Amateur videographers are invited to submit 30 to 60 second videos about psoriasis. The video can […]

Learn More July 12, 2007

How Does Innovation Occur?

It's Monday Mind Stretch time again. Here's an interview, courtesy of Guy Kawasaki of Mac marketing fame, with Scott Berkun, author of The Myths of Innovation. Interesting points: “Epiphanies” or “magic moments” are really the culmination of dozens of smaller observations, inquiries, mistakes and comedies that occurred to make the “Eureka” possible. Finding support for […]

Learn More July 2, 2007

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q:We are struggling with acquistion. During our biggest community campaign, a colleague is suggesting that we have a QR code directing donors to a donate page that does not capture donor information – just a donation and an email address. We won’t be able to post any of these new doors our lvoely newsletters, or thank you letters. We’ll likely never hear from them again. What’s the best method to get this team to see the importance about a donor vs a donation?

    Thanks so much for raising this. Yes, capturing donor information can be helpful for stewardship like newsletters, thank-you letters, impact updates. But how you ask matters. Forcing full data capture introduces friction that can significantly depress conversion, many donors may simply abandon the process. Beyond the friction itself, required fields also shift the emotional experience […]

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    Q: Should we include “Giving Tuesday” in the subject lines for the emails that are going out before Giving Tuesday?

    Unlike holidays that everyone already knows, Giving Tuesday is a created event. Many donors recognize the name but not the exact timing, so referencing it becomes a helpful cue. It serves as a reminder and taps into social norm activation (“everyone’s giving today”), which boosts response. However, we still want it paired with the mission, […]

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    Q: can we pull the match language into the subject lines? Or this should be an A/B test?

    When a subject line leads with the match (“Your gift matched!”), it risks triggering market-norm thinking: the sense that giving is a financial transaction rather than an act rooted in values, identity, and care. This shift reduces intrinsic motivation and, over time, can weaken donor satisfaction and long-term engagement. It also makes the email indistinguishable […]

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    Q: Our mid-level donor team removed the QR code from the DM donation form that links to the donation page, but have left the URL for them to type it in manually. Not sure why they are adding a barrier to the donation process for a higher value donor – but I have to ask – is there any proof – either way – if a QR donation code reduces MV online giving, has any effect on their donation amount, has any effect on off line donations? Thank you….

    There’s no evidence that QR codes suppress mid-value giving; all available research suggests they either help or have no negative effect. In fact, behavioral and usability research consistently shows the opposite: reducing friction at any point in the donation process increases completion rates and total response. And that has nothing to do with capacity and […]

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    Q: How can we effectively use behavioral science to help shift our Board’s mindset. The majority are extremely resistant to asking their networks or sharing their contact lists with us, even after a candid discussion with an external lay leader who has been training boards with her fantastic Fundraising isn’t the F Word! workshop. We have also offered to use our automated email tool to send their appeals from their own email. It is so frustrating. We even have 2 Board members and the chair trying put some accountability on them for our big event but people are not really moving!

    What you’re experiencing is very common. Resistance often isn’t about capability, but about motivation quality. If board members feel pushed into fundraising, that triggers controlled motivation (low quality motivation) i.e. obligation, guilt, or fear of judgment, which often results in avoidance. Instead, we need to create conditions for volitional motivation (high quality motivation) by satisfying […]

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    Q: Copywriters often argue the ask should appear on the first page, but that usually breaks the story in two. With a one-sided letter the ask is always on page one, but with a two-sided letter it may fall on the second page—do results differ? Has your appeal structure been tested on both one-sided and two-sided letters? I just read the article Your Appeal Outline: Thoughtful Strategy or Random Spasm?

    That’s a really thoughtful question, and you’re not the first to raise it. Many of our clients have been cautious about placing the ask at the very end. To address their concern, we’ve tested both approaches, and the results are clear: when the ask comes last, even if that means it appears on the second […]

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