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Copywriting / creative

Jeff, You Boob!

I read Jeff Brooks' Donor Power Blog every day. His creative insights are terrific. He really gets the relationship aspect of fundraising. But occasionally Jeff gets it REALLY WRONG, as with his breathless advice the other day that we should all rush off to use the Headline Analyzer to punch up our headlines. Don't you […]

Learn More June 27, 2007

Amnesty International’s Eyes On Darfur

Here is a brilliant use of internet technology (to say nothing of satellite technology) to advance a cause … hopefully saving lives. Amnesty International has created a website, Eyes on Darfur, which uses satellite photography to monitor and compile evidence of the violence in Darfur. Along with continually updated satellite imagery of villages throughout the […]

Learn More June 13, 2007

Taking Your Testimonials To A New Level

Testimonials from happy customers (as well as donors and beneficiaries) have long been a staple of marketing, advertising and fundraising. But with the advent of “consumer-generated-media” on the internet, the marketing initiative shifts to the “do it yourself” consumer. The net effect, as the Washington Post observes in Putting the I in Advertising, is that […]

Learn More May 15, 2007

Have Donors Changed In 50 Years?

I audited a direct marketing webinar the other day dealing with improving customer acquisition results. One of the presenters made the case that for all the hype about database this and viral marketing that, the most important reality is that human nature doesn't change. If you want someone to respond to your offer (or appeal […]

Learn More May 14, 2007

Political Fundraising As It Should Be

Last week I received an excellent email fundraising appeal from John Edwards. Whatever your candidate preferences, this appeal deserves high marks — and your attention — for two reasons. You can view the effort here. First, it illustrates smart use of online video technology, in this case leveraging the enormous reach of YouTube and involving […]

Learn More May 7, 2007

Nonprofit Video Contest

We were ranting about using videos for online fundraising yesterday, then lo and behold we found Lucy Bernholz at Philanthropy 2173 pointing us to a contest for nonprofit videos designed to mobilize people for social change. The contest is here at NTEN, the Nonprofit Technology Network, and you can vote by texting or online by […]

Learn More March 31, 2007

Watch My Lips

DoubleClick, a leading service provider in the digital/online advertising world, has just published an analysis of response patterns to 301 online ad campaigns running June to September 2006. The bottomline is hugely important for marketers of causes and candidates: Video ads generate at least twice the response (as measured by click throughs) as standard image […]

Learn More March 30, 2007

Best Ever Direct Mail – Getting Business

So far in our “Best Ever Direct Mail” series, we featured these fundraising appeals from the Nature Conservancy of Canada and the National Psoriasis Foundation. But agencies and consultants need to prospect too. And a couple have shared their winning business pitch letters with The Agitator. First is a letter from consumer advocate and (self-described) […]

Learn More March 15, 2007

Politics And The English Language

Marketing guru Guy Kawasaki is embarrassed for only having recently read George Orwell's 1946 essay, Politics and the English Language. No apologies needed, Guy. You've done a service by pointing illiterates like The Agitator's editors to Orwell's timeless piece. We urge our readers to sit down this weekend with your morning cup of coffee or […]

Learn More March 10, 2007

Your Direct Mail Letter Is A Person

In yet another wonderful piece, “What Orson Welles Can Teach Us About Direct Marketing,” Denny Hatch talks almost wistfully about the intimate power of the (well-crafted) direct mail letter. He quotes at length from freelancer Malcolm Decker. Here's a passage for every direct mail fundraiser to remember … “The Direct Mail LetterWith the CAN-SPAM Act […]

Learn More February 23, 2007

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q:We are struggling with acquistion. During our biggest community campaign, a colleague is suggesting that we have a QR code directing donors to a donate page that does not capture donor information – just a donation and an email address. We won’t be able to post any of these new doors our lvoely newsletters, or thank you letters. We’ll likely never hear from them again. What’s the best method to get this team to see the importance about a donor vs a donation?

    Thanks so much for raising this. Yes, capturing donor information can be helpful for stewardship like newsletters, thank-you letters, impact updates. But how you ask matters. Forcing full data capture introduces friction that can significantly depress conversion, many donors may simply abandon the process. Beyond the friction itself, required fields also shift the emotional experience […]

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    Q: Should we include “Giving Tuesday” in the subject lines for the emails that are going out before Giving Tuesday?

    Unlike holidays that everyone already knows, Giving Tuesday is a created event. Many donors recognize the name but not the exact timing, so referencing it becomes a helpful cue. It serves as a reminder and taps into social norm activation (“everyone’s giving today”), which boosts response. However, we still want it paired with the mission, […]

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    Q: can we pull the match language into the subject lines? Or this should be an A/B test?

    When a subject line leads with the match (“Your gift matched!”), it risks triggering market-norm thinking: the sense that giving is a financial transaction rather than an act rooted in values, identity, and care. This shift reduces intrinsic motivation and, over time, can weaken donor satisfaction and long-term engagement. It also makes the email indistinguishable […]

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    Q: Our mid-level donor team removed the QR code from the DM donation form that links to the donation page, but have left the URL for them to type it in manually. Not sure why they are adding a barrier to the donation process for a higher value donor – but I have to ask – is there any proof – either way – if a QR donation code reduces MV online giving, has any effect on their donation amount, has any effect on off line donations? Thank you….

    There’s no evidence that QR codes suppress mid-value giving; all available research suggests they either help or have no negative effect. In fact, behavioral and usability research consistently shows the opposite: reducing friction at any point in the donation process increases completion rates and total response. And that has nothing to do with capacity and […]

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    Q: How can we effectively use behavioral science to help shift our Board’s mindset. The majority are extremely resistant to asking their networks or sharing their contact lists with us, even after a candid discussion with an external lay leader who has been training boards with her fantastic Fundraising isn’t the F Word! workshop. We have also offered to use our automated email tool to send their appeals from their own email. It is so frustrating. We even have 2 Board members and the chair trying put some accountability on them for our big event but people are not really moving!

    What you’re experiencing is very common. Resistance often isn’t about capability, but about motivation quality. If board members feel pushed into fundraising, that triggers controlled motivation (low quality motivation) i.e. obligation, guilt, or fear of judgment, which often results in avoidance. Instead, we need to create conditions for volitional motivation (high quality motivation) by satisfying […]

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    Q: Copywriters often argue the ask should appear on the first page, but that usually breaks the story in two. With a one-sided letter the ask is always on page one, but with a two-sided letter it may fall on the second page—do results differ? Has your appeal structure been tested on both one-sided and two-sided letters? I just read the article Your Appeal Outline: Thoughtful Strategy or Random Spasm?

    That’s a really thoughtful question, and you’re not the first to raise it. Many of our clients have been cautious about placing the ask at the very end. To address their concern, we’ve tested both approaches, and the results are clear: when the ask comes last, even if that means it appears on the second […]

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