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Jeff, You Boob!

I read Jeff Brooks' Donor Power Blog every day. His creative insights are terrific. He really gets the relationship aspect of fundraising. But occasionally Jeff gets it REALLY WRONG, as with his breathless advice the other day that we should all rush off to use the Headline Analyzer to punch up our headlines. Don't you […]

Learn More June 27, 2007

Amnesty International’s Eyes On Darfur

Here is a brilliant use of internet technology (to say nothing of satellite technology) to advance a cause … hopefully saving lives. Amnesty International has created a website, Eyes on Darfur, which uses satellite photography to monitor and compile evidence of the violence in Darfur. Along with continually updated satellite imagery of villages throughout the […]

Learn More June 13, 2007

Taking Your Testimonials To A New Level

Testimonials from happy customers (as well as donors and beneficiaries) have long been a staple of marketing, advertising and fundraising. But with the advent of “consumer-generated-media” on the internet, the marketing initiative shifts to the “do it yourself” consumer. The net effect, as the Washington Post observes in Putting the I in Advertising, is that […]

Learn More May 15, 2007

Have Donors Changed In 50 Years?

I audited a direct marketing webinar the other day dealing with improving customer acquisition results. One of the presenters made the case that for all the hype about database this and viral marketing that, the most important reality is that human nature doesn't change. If you want someone to respond to your offer (or appeal […]

Learn More May 14, 2007

Political Fundraising As It Should Be

Last week I received an excellent email fundraising appeal from John Edwards. Whatever your candidate preferences, this appeal deserves high marks — and your attention — for two reasons. You can view the effort here. First, it illustrates smart use of online video technology, in this case leveraging the enormous reach of YouTube and involving […]

Learn More May 7, 2007

Nonprofit Video Contest

We were ranting about using videos for online fundraising yesterday, then lo and behold we found Lucy Bernholz at Philanthropy 2173 pointing us to a contest for nonprofit videos designed to mobilize people for social change. The contest is here at NTEN, the Nonprofit Technology Network, and you can vote by texting or online by […]

Learn More March 31, 2007

Watch My Lips

DoubleClick, a leading service provider in the digital/online advertising world, has just published an analysis of response patterns to 301 online ad campaigns running June to September 2006. The bottomline is hugely important for marketers of causes and candidates: Video ads generate at least twice the response (as measured by click throughs) as standard image […]

Learn More March 30, 2007

Best Ever Direct Mail – Getting Business

So far in our “Best Ever Direct Mail” series, we featured these fundraising appeals from the Nature Conservancy of Canada and the National Psoriasis Foundation. But agencies and consultants need to prospect too. And a couple have shared their winning business pitch letters with The Agitator. First is a letter from consumer advocate and (self-described) […]

Learn More March 15, 2007

Politics And The English Language

Marketing guru Guy Kawasaki is embarrassed for only having recently read George Orwell's 1946 essay, Politics and the English Language. No apologies needed, Guy. You've done a service by pointing illiterates like The Agitator's editors to Orwell's timeless piece. We urge our readers to sit down this weekend with your morning cup of coffee or […]

Learn More March 10, 2007

Your Direct Mail Letter Is A Person

In yet another wonderful piece, “What Orson Welles Can Teach Us About Direct Marketing,” Denny Hatch talks almost wistfully about the intimate power of the (well-crafted) direct mail letter. He quotes at length from freelancer Malcolm Decker. Here's a passage for every direct mail fundraiser to remember … “The Direct Mail LetterWith the CAN-SPAM Act […]

Learn More February 23, 2007

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q: As a designer who works with non-profits on fundraising strategy, I see the language like the following: “Our supporters help empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs.” I do not think the word “help” is useful–I think “Our supporters empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs. ” is much more engaging. Thoughts?

    Whether “help” is more engaging or not really depends on the framing and context. The word help can sometimes weaken the perceived agency of the supporter, making their role feel secondary rather than central (your point). On the other hand, help can also signal collaboration rather than implying full ownership of the outcome, which might […]

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    Q: We started offering a donor cover option last april 1. The data to date suggests this may be dampening giving.eg. those who say yes to donor cover have a lower average gift (based on analysis of 6000+ gifts). I’m wondering if those who give lower gifts feel more guilt and therefore say yes to donor cover or if the presence of donor cover is making people adjust (lower) their gift size to accommodate the extra 3%. Would love any insights you have.

    Great question! Here’s how behavioral science can help unpack what might be happening: Pain of Paying: Even a small extra charge can make giving feel more transactional than emotional, potentially reducing generosity. Fairness Concerns: Some donors might perceive donor cover as a surcharge rather than a contribution to the cause. If they feel the charity […]

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    Q: When writing an appeal, I waffle back and forth between writing “Your gift CAN…” or “Your gift WILL…” Any studies of which of these two words is best for an appeal?

    The choice between “Your gift CAN…” and “Your gift WILL…” taps into the psychological framing of certainty vs. possibility. Currently, there is no academic research directly comparing these two framings in charitable appeals. However, I suspect no framing is universally better—the outcome likely depends on your target audience and the campaign’s goal. Here are some thoughts: Certainty Framing – […]

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    Q: Do you have any insight on whether integrating an individual giving appeal with other comms from the charity in both appearance and messaging can uplift results? Or does the actual appeal become ‘lost’ for lack of stand-out?

    Integrating an individual giving appeal with other communications from a charity can have both positive and negative effects, and the outcome largely depends on how it’s executed. Advantages of Integration Brand Consistency: Maintaining a consistent appearance and messaging across all communications can reinforce the org’s brand identity and strengthen brand recognition and trust among your […]

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    Q: Is there any research on response rate impact in direct mail when referring to a sustainer gift as ongoing or recurring (catching all frequencies) v. monthly or annual?

    I’m not aware of any in-market tests specifically comparing recurring vs. gift frequency language. I suspect the answer might not be the same with all gift frequencies, nor with all people. It sounds like a great opportunity for you to test and find out what works for your audience. Based on the literature, here’s a couple […]

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    Q: A major conservation nonprofit sends me lots of mail, many of which have on the envelope “time to renew” or “2nd notice.” I find this practice deceptive, especially as I haven’t given to said organization since 1997. It must be effective or they wouldn’t do it. But is it ethical?

    Based on what we know from existing data, those renewal notices can actually be pretty effective in getting people to donate. They tap into our psychology – creating a sense of urgency, reminding us of past support, and using personalization to make the message hit home. They’re playing on our natural tendencies to feel obligated […]

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