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LCV and Defenders “Exchange” E-mail Lists?

The coal for the furnace of direct mail fundraising has been list rentals and exchanges. A somewhat incestuous process where Sierra Club rents from NRDC who rents from Environmental Defense who rents from Sierra Club and around and around. Always with the assumption (desperate hope?) that someone, somewhere must be adding new names/donors into the […]

Learn More February 19, 2007

Best Ever Direct Mail – National Psoriasis Foundation

Here from Catie Coman at the National Psoriasis Foundation is a “best ever” fundraising appeal to current donors. Catie says: “This pulled an amazing 18% response rate from our active donors. It’s one of the most successful direct mail pieces in the history of the organization.” Two small observations about this letter. First, it offers […]

Learn More February 11, 2007

Five Rules Of Viral Marketing

Sean Carton of web strategy and design firm idfive offers some useful insights on viral marketing. We'd all like to come up with the irresistably clever online video, gimmick or other message that rolls up a million views in a month for our cause at virtually no cost. But it's not so easy … and […]

Learn More February 9, 2007

Best Ever Direct Mail – Nature Conservancy of Canada

David Love sends us this “Best Ever” direct mail package seeking legacies for the Nature Conservancy of Canada. Here's his description of the mailing and the response it generated. The mailing asked the loyal supporters of the Nature Conservancy of Canada to consider leaving a legacy to the organization. As you can see from the […]

Learn More February 4, 2007

Lust

Did we say “lust?” We meant HOUTLUST, a nifty blog originating in The Netherlands that offers a worldwide window to current nonprofit advertising and social marketing campaigns. You're likely to see as much or more material regarding non-US initiatives as you will campaigns underway in the US of A, but all the better to get […]

Learn More January 20, 2007

The 59 “Smartest” Orgs Online

“A” for the idea. “D” for the execution. Unfortunately, that's how I'd rate this effort by Seth Godin (before whom I normally genuflect) to identify the “smartest” nonprofits in terms of using the latest online tools (especially the so-called Web 2.0 social networking platforms like Flickr, MySpace, etc) to build community and enthusiasm. To be […]

Learn More January 17, 2007

The Holy Grail Of Direct Mail

Direct mail guru Denny Hatch has written another marvelous piece, this time celebrating two direct mail letters he regards as the best of all time. All we'll tell you here (link below) is that one was written in the 12th Century, and the other survived as a control from 1974 to 2003, accounting for one […]

Learn More January 10, 2007

Top Ten Cliches That Work In Copy

From our archives. Happy Holidays! From Guest Agitator Jerry Huntsinger … If you’ve heard it over and over and over again, yes it’s a cliché.But is a cliché bad for your letter? Nope, because a cliché turns a light on inside your reader’s mind. Avoiding clichés leaves the reader in darkness. 1. Here’s how you […]

Learn More December 27, 2006

Cool Tool – Charity Badges

Network for Good is developing a cool fundraising tool for the volunteer fundraiser. Called “Charity Badges,” the idea is to give any individual an easy way to promote the charities of their choice on their personal blogs, AIM page, websites and, soon, web pages on social networking sites like MySpace. You can build a badge […]

Learn More December 17, 2006

Watch And Learn – The Dove Evolution Campaign

Dove, the soap people, have a “Campaign for Real Beauty” underway which is “must see” for folks who question whether consumer marketers can teach nonprofit marketers a thing or two. To say nothing of folks who care about what real beauty is. In this case, a powerful 75-second video, titled Evolution, triggers a dialogue about […]

Learn More November 2, 2006

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q:We are struggling with acquistion. During our biggest community campaign, a colleague is suggesting that we have a QR code directing donors to a donate page that does not capture donor information – just a donation and an email address. We won’t be able to post any of these new doors our lvoely newsletters, or thank you letters. We’ll likely never hear from them again. What’s the best method to get this team to see the importance about a donor vs a donation?

    Thanks so much for raising this. Yes, capturing donor information can be helpful for stewardship like newsletters, thank-you letters, impact updates. But how you ask matters. Forcing full data capture introduces friction that can significantly depress conversion, many donors may simply abandon the process. Beyond the friction itself, required fields also shift the emotional experience […]

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    Q: Should we include “Giving Tuesday” in the subject lines for the emails that are going out before Giving Tuesday?

    Unlike holidays that everyone already knows, Giving Tuesday is a created event. Many donors recognize the name but not the exact timing, so referencing it becomes a helpful cue. It serves as a reminder and taps into social norm activation (“everyone’s giving today”), which boosts response. However, we still want it paired with the mission, […]

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    Q: can we pull the match language into the subject lines? Or this should be an A/B test?

    When a subject line leads with the match (“Your gift matched!”), it risks triggering market-norm thinking: the sense that giving is a financial transaction rather than an act rooted in values, identity, and care. This shift reduces intrinsic motivation and, over time, can weaken donor satisfaction and long-term engagement. It also makes the email indistinguishable […]

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    Q: Our mid-level donor team removed the QR code from the DM donation form that links to the donation page, but have left the URL for them to type it in manually. Not sure why they are adding a barrier to the donation process for a higher value donor – but I have to ask – is there any proof – either way – if a QR donation code reduces MV online giving, has any effect on their donation amount, has any effect on off line donations? Thank you….

    There’s no evidence that QR codes suppress mid-value giving; all available research suggests they either help or have no negative effect. In fact, behavioral and usability research consistently shows the opposite: reducing friction at any point in the donation process increases completion rates and total response. And that has nothing to do with capacity and […]

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    Q: How can we effectively use behavioral science to help shift our Board’s mindset. The majority are extremely resistant to asking their networks or sharing their contact lists with us, even after a candid discussion with an external lay leader who has been training boards with her fantastic Fundraising isn’t the F Word! workshop. We have also offered to use our automated email tool to send their appeals from their own email. It is so frustrating. We even have 2 Board members and the chair trying put some accountability on them for our big event but people are not really moving!

    What you’re experiencing is very common. Resistance often isn’t about capability, but about motivation quality. If board members feel pushed into fundraising, that triggers controlled motivation (low quality motivation) i.e. obligation, guilt, or fear of judgment, which often results in avoidance. Instead, we need to create conditions for volitional motivation (high quality motivation) by satisfying […]

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    Q: Copywriters often argue the ask should appear on the first page, but that usually breaks the story in two. With a one-sided letter the ask is always on page one, but with a two-sided letter it may fall on the second page—do results differ? Has your appeal structure been tested on both one-sided and two-sided letters? I just read the article Your Appeal Outline: Thoughtful Strategy or Random Spasm?

    That’s a really thoughtful question, and you’re not the first to raise it. Many of our clients have been cautious about placing the ask at the very end. To address their concern, we’ve tested both approaches, and the results are clear: when the ask comes last, even if that means it appears on the second […]

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