Donation Page Blunders

November 4, 2016      Tom Belford

They’ve ‘opened the envelope’. They’re checking out the ‘order card’. But then they walk away … without making a donation.

Why? You had them right on the verge.

Possibly, just confusion, discordant message, too many choices. Crafters of direct mail packages know how hugely important carefully designed order cards are for ‘closing’ the gift.

And the same — including the same mistakes to avoid — applies to online Donate pages.

Only the ‘walk away’ (aka ‘shopping cart abandonment’) probably occurs much faster, due to the impatience consumers have with anything that marginally slows down their online experience.

Here are some very straightforward blunders to avoid from John Haydon, writing in NonProfit Pro, to improve the performance of your Donate pages.

Five simple rules to follow (with illustrations):

  1. Your Donate page isn’t mobile.
  2. You’re missing an emotional hook (remember: you made the donor feel something to get to your Donate page … don’t forget that once she gets there!).
  3. Your message is inconsistent (again, follow-through is important; don’t switch signals — or offer a generic page — once they’ve been inspired to act).
  4. Too many distractions (resist the temptation to ask for more than the gift!).
  5. Your ask is weak (and/or disconnected from the donor and the impact they want to have).

In the next 57 days, you’re going to send out a gazillion email appeals. Don’t waste them.

This weekend, take some time to browse a few websites, including your own. Note who’s doing it right … clean, simple, mobile-friendly.

Are you making any of John’s blunders?

Tom

2 responses to “Donation Page Blunders”

  1. Pamela Grow says:

    Thanks for this, Tom. It’s astonishing how little attention so many organizations pay to their donate page. We’ve been running a mystery shopping experiment for the past few years, making online gifts to two organizations every week and tracking the follow-up. It has NOT been pretty. For those who are looking to improve their processes (and create their year-end email campaign), John Haydon and I, along with Julia Campbell, have launched an online fundraising webinar series. Today’s the last day to register: http://basicsandmorefundraising.com/

  2. Diane says:

    Some good tips but Tom’s post would have been a lot more credible to me without the spelling (your vs. you’re), punctuation (period outside the single? quotation marks) and grammatical (pronoun/antecedent agreement) errors.

    Tip #6: Have someone with a superior command of spelling, grammar and punctuation proofread all content several times before it’s published. It absolutely matters!!