Improving Your (envelope) Open Rates
These direct marketing kids today… what with their emails and their analytics and their Facebooks — they don’t know how hard it used to be. Back in my day, we sent people letters. You couldn’t measure open rates! You’d just see if they sent back their check and hoped they opened it! And the mail carrier walked uphill both ways.
The problem is that my day is today. We still can’t tell if people are opening our envelopes.
Given the amount of testing of colors and windows and teaser copy that goes into this area that can only be measured tertiarily, this is a pity.
Today’s study doesn’t entirely solve this but takes a nice step forward in understanding what gets people to open and react to envelopes.
To test envelopes, GfK has a panel of German households who give GfK the direct mail pieces they do not want at the end of each month, either opened or unopened. The study authors (Feld et al) then looked at the impact of envelopes on the open rate and keeping rate of the mail pieces. They looked at 68 attributes of 36 design characteristics across almost 400 nonprofit campaigns. You can get the whole study here if you want the full list, but suffice it to say that when you are looking at what percentage of the response device in an envelope is colored and have five different segments for this, you are doing a pretty comprehensive look at the piece.
The first big result to note is that the open rate did not correlate to the keeping rate. I’ve seen this personally — when an envelope promises something the contents do not deliver, the piece is shredded with extreme prejudice. Just as when you have a match or photo or story in the mail piece, you should have that same match or photo or story prominently on your web site with the assumption that some people will bridge the digital/analog divide, your envelope and what’s in it should be telling the same story.
Now on the nitty-gritty:
- Colored envelopes decreased open rates. I know, it’s difficult to cut through the clutter, but that apparently isn’t the way to do it.
- Larger envelopes, questioning teasers, and a promotional design on the envelope back all increase open rates. I would go one step further and advocate for questions that can’t be answered with a yes/no and that elicit mission-specific curiosity. While you could put “What is the capital of North Dakota?”* on your envelope, I wouldn’t recommend it.
- Pre-stamped return envelopes increase keeping rate; postage paid on the outside envelope decreases open rates. These may seem obvious, but you will have to assess whether the cost of a pre-stamped return envelope is worth the increase, as both will increase your cost per piece. Generally speaking, when I’ve tested this, it’s started to become profitable at about the $100-$500 donor level, depending on the piece and donor base.
- A testimonial from a helper increases keeping rates. Part of this is likely that it’s a personal story; part of it could be that the helper is often an authority, which generally increases compliance rates.
- Premiums can work, but expensive ones decrease keeping rates. People like to receive things (reciprocity at work), but the idea that the nonprofit is spending more on the premium than on the mission is a significant turnoff.
- Efforts to recruit new members decrease keeping rates. My guess here is that it’s too much too soon. I’ve seen membership efforts do very well to existing donors (who likely want a sense of belonging), but for new supporters, it might be like proposing marriage on the first date.
- In the letter, logos and fax numbers increase keeping rates. Yes, fax numbers. It also appears that having the phone number decreases keeping rates. I have no idea why this would be. If you do, please leave it in the comments to help illuminate us. (One person I discussed this with indicated this could be a German or European phenomenon as she had observed fax machine as a sign of legitimacy when she lived in Germany. Thoughts?)
- People kept letters more often closer to the end of the month. Perhaps a “more disposable income” effect at the end of the month? I’m not sure here either.
Finally, longer letters and personalization increase keeping rates. As Roger pointed out recently:
Of the thousands of direct mail and emails I’ve written, only ONE short one ever beat a longer alternative: this letter for DNC in 1972:
Dear Friend,
There are two reasons I need your check today.
Richard Nixon and Spiro Agnew.
Sincerely,
Lawrence T O’Brien
Chairman
So, the ideal mail piece in this study (were cost no object) would be a larger-than-average white envelope. It would not use the impersonal “postage paid” indicia, would ask an enticing question to get the potential reader interested, and the reverse would feature a strong offer. A letter with your logo and fax number (for now, don’t question it — just go with it) that is more than one page would be on the inside, featuring a testimonial from a helper. And your return envelope would be prestamped.
Nothing completely earth-shattering here, I would say, but these are some very solid tips for making your pieces more effective.
Nick
* It’s a trick question — both the N and the D are capitals.
Thought on the logo/fax number increasing – it may (MAY) increase the sense of legitimacy as they connote letterhead and they provide a sense that the piece is coming from a place of authority within an organization and is not just a junk mail mass distribution letter. Phones and faxes, specifically, would seem to go to somewhere within the organization, and that somewhere would be ok if you called them to talk to an actual person, and they would know what you’re talking about when you mention what’s in the appeal letter. At least that’s my response to these things. An org name and logo alone at the top of the piece says “read this even though it didn’t come from actual people.”
great study but rather than looking at how many mail packs were kept, I’d look at the responses as in checks or credit cards received and online donations received and some of these results may be different. Also, if this was only done in Germany, I’d love to see it done in the U.S.. as certain guidelines for dm are different in different countries.
also, you have to bear in mind at which time of the year all of these packs are being mailed.
just saying… but keep’m coming.
Great info – I never even thought about timing a send towards the end fo the month. Thank you for sharing!
This study reminds me of a straightforward point that Jerry Huntsinger made years ago. Jerry wrote in an article that the perfect envelope has a first-class stamp affixed to it. When I did my doctoral research on the language of fundraising at Claremont Graduate University a decade ago, in addition to showing that narrative appeals worked better than nonnarrative, I also documented the response rates among three panels in an American Heart Association test.
My research compared response variation among 1.) a 25,000-piece panel hand-addressed in genuine handwriting, 2.) a 25,000-piece panel hand-addressed in computer-simulated handwriting, and 3.) a 24,997-piece segment that used a double-window envelope.
The package addressed in computer-simulated handwriting beat the genuine-handwriting segment 9.10% versus 8.45%. And the package addressed in simulated handwriting beat the double-window package by 346% (5.89% to 1.7%).
That was the good news. Then the American Heart Association then rolled out the test to 1,077,067 households. But first, they allowed their art department to over-design the very personal-looking carrier envelope that had performed so well. Branding considerations overrode the proof of test data and the envelope no longer looked personal. Result: the roll-out failed because the carrier had been over-designed.
These tests are summarized in a dissertation abstract titled American Heart Association Case Study. It is available at my research site: http://www.TheWrittenVoice.org. Bottom line: It doesn’t matter what’s inside if the envelope doesn’t get opened. And my research on the linguistic makeup of fund appeals adds the following to this axiom: It doesn’t matter that the envelope gets opened if what’s inside doesn’t get read.