Let’s Play A Game

September 11, 2020      Kiki Koutmeridou, Chief Behavioral Scientist, DonorVoice

Here’s a game for you, the professional fundraiser.

Below is Wikipedia’s solicitation. It has been floating around for a while now, and, as a behavioral scientist, I wonder why they haven’t changed it yet.

Can you spot the issues with this request? Tell us in the comments section what they are and what suggestions tied to evidence you have for improvement.

[To see what we would do differently (Hint: it’s 4 things), look out for Monday’s post.)

Looking forward to reading your ideas!

Kiki

6 responses to “Let’s Play A Game”

  1. Chris Keating says:

    Interestingly, Wikipedia’s fundraising messages have been tested tens of thousands of times, and the “most people don’t give” line is one product of that huge amount of testing. It definitely, definitely works for them.

    I did a blog about this last year: https://medium.com/@chriskfundraising/why-doesnt-social-proof-work-for-wikipedia-fundraising-65d55a047911

    • Kiki Koutmeridou, Chief Behavioral Scientist, DonorVoice says:

      Hi Chris, thanks for sharing their report – good to know Wikipedia tested the negative social proof message out. That answers part of the research question I had in mind – the other half will be revealed on Monday. Let’s continue this conversation then!

  2. I would suggest that most of it be in the “I” the founder, vs “we” Wikipedia voice to strengthen the I/you direct connection with reader. Everything else looks good–it matches who they are, their tone. I have given to them, and hardly give to anyone 🙂

  3. Just looked up their financial statement for 2019 which they post on their website. $111 Million posted in donations and contributions, and a pretty fine balance sheet.

    • Kiki Koutmeridou, Chief Behavioral Scientist, DonorVoice says:

      Thanks Gayle – the fact they raise good money on this request doesn’t mean they couldn’t raise even more if it was adapted. That’s why Wikipedia keeps testing messages too. We just wanted to identify key behavioural principles that could be tested to see if they could increase giving further. But you’re right, my word choice (“issues”) was probably not the right one.