Top Ten Cliches That Work In Copy
From our archives. Happy Holidays!
From Guest Agitator Jerry Huntsinger …
If youve heard it over and over and over again, yes its a cliché.
But is a cliché bad for your letter? Nope, because a cliché turns a light on inside your readers mind. Avoiding clichés leaves the reader in darkness.
1. Heres how you can
2. Let me show you
3. The quickest way to
4. One-of-a-kind
5. Isnt it about time that
6. Once in a lifetime
7. Once and for all
8. Discover the truth about
9. Urgently needed
10. Youll be surprised to learn that
If you have more, or better ones, we'd love to hear them.
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