Words Are Precision Tools
Roger might have overwhelmed you with numbers and analysis in his recent two detailed posts on acquisition and lifetime value, here and here.
I’ll grossly oversimplify what he established with the numbers.
It boils down to embracing this mindset: Treat a first-time giver as a lead, not a donor. If you then deal with these folks as leads, you’re more likely to handle them with the care and attention they deserve. They, in turn, will be more likely to give again … then you can begin to call them donors. A relationship is beginning.
But, as Ken Burnett, argues in this rant, don’t then get lazy and screw up the relationship with lousy words!
Complaining of a recent ‘personalized’ appeal he received:
“…having sucked up to me with transparent nonsense and sprayed around entirely gratuitous thanks and congratulations, the writer went on, clumsily, to ask me for even more money.”
What did you really think of this letter, Ken?! He continues:
“We have to get better at what we say when we write to donors. A lot better. If this were a rare and singular exception I’d have let it go. It isn’t. We all know it isn’t.
So, fundraisers, must try harder. Perhaps if we did we might start to reverse the appalling attrition statistics that plague our industry and all its endeavours.
The thing is, words are precision tools each with distinct, specific meanings. They should be assembled together with care and consideration, not gummed in strips as if interchangeable or sprayed around with seeming abandon regardless of their combined effect.”
Amen.
Tom