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How to Ruin Good Copy

We think and worry a lot about copy (here, here, here and here). And so does Tom Ahern,  Kathy Swayze, Jeff Brooks and many other proven fundraising copywriters. Are we wasting our time? Let me explain the reason behind this question. A well-crafted piece of fundraising copy is far more than words on paper or […]

Learn More August 27, 2021

The Shape of a Good Story

Everyone’s got a story. If only this were true.  In our extensive review of fundraising copy we find the sector copy reads more like an academic journal than an involving work of fiction.   In case you’re wondering, the latter produces more reading and giving. The story part of the sector’s writing is especially weak. So, […]

Learn More August 25, 2021

No More Nudges

Behavioural Economics took flight only to come crashing down with a bang. Failure to replicate even the most basic of findings has started to raise eyebrows and questions. I can personally attest to this. I wasn’t immune to the allure of cognitive biases and the quick and easy interventions they offer – a.k.a nudges. I […]

Learn More August 23, 2021

Fundraising’s Silver Bullet

In the nonprofit world where 7 out of 10 newly acquired donors will not give to that organization again, you’d think fundraisers and CEOs would be tripping over themselves to gain ANY insight on what they could be doing to hold on to supporters by improving donor experiences. The commercial world figured out the value […]

Learn More August 20, 2021

Fundraisers Giving Back

One of the truly impressive qualities of folks in fundraising is their generosity when it comes to giving back to advance our trade. You can see this generosity in the Comments sections of The Agitator –the willingness to share criticism, thoughts, and ideas. ….And in the countless hours of webinars and conferences presented by dozens […]

Learn More August 18, 2021

The Now or Never Effect

Faux deadlines are a stock in trade for online fundraising. “Faux” because most organizations will  take every penny that comes in past the deadline and even if there is a match thrown in to juice the offer  – e.g. give by Date X and your gift will be matched. But does it work?  And “work” […]

Learn More August 16, 2021

Conference with 100% Money Back Guarantee

If a conference promised me, The speakers will blow my mind Killer swag (speaking of which, DonorVoice got killer swag as part of our PETA sponsorship which is neither here nor there but rarely is the swag killer and so props to PETA) 100% money back guarantee I’d sign up right away.  Hell, we’d sponsor […]

Learn More August 13, 2021

The Power of Giving Circles

A wise fundraiser constantly searches for new grass. Not ‘new’ in the sense of moving on to a new position.  Not necessarily “greener” in terms of a richer lode of donors.  But certainly  “new” in terms of sources and approaches to giving beyond the conventional landscape on which most fundraisers graze. As we recently warned, […]

Learn More August 11, 2021

Take a Guess to Increase Conversion

What percentage of Americans donate to charity in a given year?  Take a guess.  No really.  What’d you guess?  Was it less than 7 in 10 Americans?  If so and if I tell you the percentage is 73% (a recent Gallup 2020 figure) then you’re more likely to donate if I ask you to do […]

Learn More August 9, 2021

Who’s in the Behavior Business? Charity Program Staff or Fundraisers?

Are you in the behavior business?  Or does this task fall to your program staff? There is a growing paradox in charitable organizations between how the program staff and fundraising are (or are not) rethinking their most intractable problems.  The former is realizing they’re in the behavior business. Behavior can be described, predicted or understood.  […]

Learn More August 6, 2021

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    Behavioral Science Q & A

    Q: As a designer who works with non-profits on fundraising strategy, I see the language like the following: “Our supporters help empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs.” I do not think the word “help” is useful–I think “Our supporters empower every girl, ensuring she has the resources she needs. ” is much more engaging. Thoughts?

    Whether “help” is more engaging or not really depends on the framing and context. The word help can sometimes weaken the perceived agency of the supporter, making their role feel secondary rather than central (your point). On the other hand, help can also signal collaboration rather than implying full ownership of the outcome, which might […]

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    Q: We started offering a donor cover option last april 1. The data to date suggests this may be dampening giving.eg. those who say yes to donor cover have a lower average gift (based on analysis of 6000+ gifts). I’m wondering if those who give lower gifts feel more guilt and therefore say yes to donor cover or if the presence of donor cover is making people adjust (lower) their gift size to accommodate the extra 3%. Would love any insights you have.

    Great question! Here’s how behavioral science can help unpack what might be happening: Pain of Paying: Even a small extra charge can make giving feel more transactional than emotional, potentially reducing generosity. Fairness Concerns: Some donors might perceive donor cover as a surcharge rather than a contribution to the cause. If they feel the charity […]

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    Q: When writing an appeal, I waffle back and forth between writing “Your gift CAN…” or “Your gift WILL…” Any studies of which of these two words is best for an appeal?

    The choice between “Your gift CAN…” and “Your gift WILL…” taps into the psychological framing of certainty vs. possibility. Currently, there is no academic research directly comparing these two framings in charitable appeals. However, I suspect no framing is universally better—the outcome likely depends on your target audience and the campaign’s goal. Here are some thoughts: Certainty Framing – […]

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    Q: Do you have any insight on whether integrating an individual giving appeal with other comms from the charity in both appearance and messaging can uplift results? Or does the actual appeal become ‘lost’ for lack of stand-out?

    Integrating an individual giving appeal with other communications from a charity can have both positive and negative effects, and the outcome largely depends on how it’s executed. Advantages of Integration Brand Consistency: Maintaining a consistent appearance and messaging across all communications can reinforce the org’s brand identity and strengthen brand recognition and trust among your […]

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    Q: Is there any research on response rate impact in direct mail when referring to a sustainer gift as ongoing or recurring (catching all frequencies) v. monthly or annual?

    I’m not aware of any in-market tests specifically comparing recurring vs. gift frequency language. I suspect the answer might not be the same with all gift frequencies, nor with all people. It sounds like a great opportunity for you to test and find out what works for your audience. Based on the literature, here’s a couple […]

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    Q: A major conservation nonprofit sends me lots of mail, many of which have on the envelope “time to renew” or “2nd notice.” I find this practice deceptive, especially as I haven’t given to said organization since 1997. It must be effective or they wouldn’t do it. But is it ethical?

    Based on what we know from existing data, those renewal notices can actually be pretty effective in getting people to donate. They tap into our psychology – creating a sense of urgency, reminding us of past support, and using personalization to make the message hit home. They’re playing on our natural tendencies to feel obligated […]

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